The issue I found with the paper was that the paragraphs were not organized over all it was very good. The issue with the paper was identify because she had just one big paragraph. What strategies did you utilize or recommend? The strategies I used were organizing paragraph, pulling out information from the students. What led you to believe the session was effective? What would you do differently next time?







My first tutoring session went very well.  I found it hard to find anything wrong with my tutee paper. After the second time I read over the paper  ask questions such as " how do you feel about the paper?" what are some of your strengths in this paper?" and "what are some of your weakness?" she began to tell me that she think she did all right on the paper. Then she ask me what I thought about a part she thought was weird. In her paper she spoke about the abuse that people go through during hard worked labor jobs. Then towards the end of the paper she jumps into a technology part. The tutee explained to me that the technology part was not in it's rightful place. I then told her that she can put it towards the end of her paper so that way she does not go back and forth on a topic. Told her finish one topic then  go on to an other topic. I told her she should put more of her opinion in her paper. as well as getting more background information about what children did for hard labor. she seemed to agree and understand everything I was telling her. I also showed her how to create paragraphs and her run on sentences short. We also focus on word choice as well. I must say that at first i was nervous but then it just went away. I would like to say that the student I tutor was happy with what I helped her with.