My second  observation did not go to well. I seen a lot of things the tutor was doing wrong. She focus more on low order concerns. Such as correcting errors also taking usurping owership. when the tutee would try to give his idea she would by pass it and tell him no we should put this. She did not seem interested in his work. After  she focus on low order concerns she then focus on the high order concerns. The tutor told the student that the some of the paragraphs needed to be longer. Her tone and body language was very strong. And the student just seemed to be scared to give his opinion or even an idea to her. I would have felt the same if that was my session. Out through the session I felt that she was just trying to rush through it and get it over with. She did not take up the whole hour at all. When observing I thought that she was just doing the paper for him.